2-089 Dutch fool

Another coincidence is that the councilwoman guessed right. On the other hand, how many people in a mask and cape could be running around town?

Naming your characters

I… I don’t have names for these two ladies yet! There, I said it.

Every book I read on storytelling or scriptwriting says something along the lines that you need to name recurring characters and soon into the story too. That is suppose to bring the audience closer to the characters and probably easier to follow the connections within the story.

Besides that I got in trouble writing the ‘about this episode’… where I referred to one of the ladies as ‘councilwoman’. For some reason I can’t decide on the names. I suppose I’ll get to them in the next scene’s they appear in!